Equalization
I like the overall song, but that equalization isn't good at the beginning. It actually pressures my ears slightly, and doesn't let up. Maybe put a little more, I dunno, bass or treble? I can't tell which it needs xP but it's definitely missing SOMETHING big.
Yep, i actually did that on purpose but it annoyed me too so ill change that right away!
-Edit-
- Changed Intro
- Damian
Love the piano
I love this one, especially the piano sound. The drop just after 1:30 was handled beautifully, and it finishes really well. You're really good at lighter trance songs! Keep producing, I'll be listening :) 5/5, 9/10
Love the effects
It's pretty awesome! Almost repetitive, but you manage to block that by adding the awesome effects. Still, it's just got a touch of repetition that keeps me from giving it a ten. Maybe work on playing with the main melody a little?
5/5, 9/10, I like the style!
thanks!
I have some pretty good ideas for new ones.
I'm gonna change the synth melody up for each verse, and add more bass to it, and I'll probably sidechain the chords to get a more distinct verse/chorus change so people can tell the difference more easily.
Pretty chill
It's definitely simple, yes. But I feel like it was meant to be simple; if you'd add to it, it'd lose the relaxed but focused style to it. Excellent work, especially if this isn't your usual genre! Definitely going on my iPod.
I'd give it a nine or ten, but that's for those Perfect Songs, you know? Don't feel bad :P
Thanks a ton for the kind words :) It has motivated me to work on the song some more.
I have never considered my music...Ipod worthy
Really peaceful
Although at some parts it sounds a little discordant, but that just could be that I don't usually listen to this kind of stuff.
Also, could you make a longer version? I'd love to put this on my iPod as, say, relaxation music or something, but I need more than a minute of it for it to really work :)
Still, very nice. I see you were going for peaceful, and you pretty much achieved it.
thanks for the review! I'm still very new at composing piano pieces but I'm getting better. I'll keep uploading new ones as inspiration strikes. Peace, friend.
WHOA
I gotta say, I'm more into techno/electro than metal, though I like a good metal song every once in a while. This has satisfied my metal craving for a few months. I can't believe it's automated, it's amazing! Well done, keep making more like this!
Thanks Man! Just so yous know... only the drums are automated. Guitars are all reals! the drums will be some day... hopefully!
Almost perfect
I love this song... It's got excellent transitions, and extremely creative leads. You mix instruments together very well. But the ONLY problem I have with this amazing song is the flow... It's got these amazing leads, awesome transitions, great instruments... And yet, I feel as if something's making it seem empty. Possibly the overly canned percussion? If you could work on the drums, you'd have /perfection/. They just seem a little lacking. 5/5, 9/10.
Wow
Again and again you seem to score big with your songs... I can honestly say I wish I were you. Forget that others think it's repetitive; if the melody is good, roll with it! Amazing work! Please don't stop making music. This is an inspiration.
Improving!
Your quality is a lot better in this one; I really like the variety of instruments :) Sure, it's still very slightly repetitive, but you cover that well with the variety. Great work. 9/10, 5/5. I've also favorited you; I hope you keep uploading :D
Thank you very much!
Don't just leave the song hanging though, spread the word!
The reason I left the melody there is because, if you listen, it makes for a VERY AWESOME ending :D
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